Clan Dragoon
SOLDIER Third Class
"Well, since Aerith died, she unofficially got bumped up to 'main heroine' status"
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Post by Clan Dragoon on Feb 19, 2009 5:21:20 GMT
Speaking of teasing - here it is - the very FIRST DRAFT (very rough) of MR's - Any Moment Now.As you can see - this turned out very differently then I first predicted. I'm unsure of my feelings on it, I wanted to use more effects and fades and such - but it was getting cramped. Really the main thing I like about this version is the rich lighting. It took a long time to get that right. So MR, Do I scratch this version? Fix it? What are your thoughts?
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Post by Moira Rose on Feb 19, 2009 5:30:09 GMT
OMG! Nice!
I like the lighting, as you've mentioned, and the immense serenity of both their expressions. THe words in the background are a tad too dark to be seen, maybe a different colour? White?
The only thing is, the story's basically about her without Zack, so the picture is a tad off. I was thinking more on the lines of her alone and Zack in the background, so it shows that she's only with him in memory.
Orororor, you could try fading out Zack's image so she's leaning on his shoulder, but it's only a memory of him that she's clinging onto. Sounds plausible?
(wait is that TSENG in the background? Nice!)
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Clan Dragoon
SOLDIER Third Class
"Well, since Aerith died, she unofficially got bumped up to 'main heroine' status"
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Post by Clan Dragoon on Feb 19, 2009 5:41:12 GMT
I've got some ideas - I'll get to working on them and get another draft for you!
And yeah, that is Tseng in the background... and Zack... dead - though he's impossible to see and it's been bugging me.
Thanks MR!
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Post by Lunatic Belle on Feb 19, 2009 9:49:55 GMT
OMG, A BIG VERSION!!! I loooove it!
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Post by Hope on Feb 19, 2009 11:15:20 GMT
Oh that's really cool. I love Tseng in the background and the scene outside Midgar. So awesome!
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Post by Youko-Kokuryuuha on Feb 19, 2009 23:22:31 GMT
I love the lighting on Zack and Aerith, and their expressions are so sweet. ...But Tseng is rather difficult to see. And I didn't really know Zack was there until you pointed him out. >.>
And moira, do you mean this image?
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Post by Pen Against Sword on Feb 20, 2009 2:15:34 GMT
That's pretty dern good, Clan.
Though I have to say, I didn't see Zack in the background until you pointed it out, so it sort of looks like Tseng is just standing there, staring piercingly at the happy couple, planning on what best way to MURDER THEM IN THEIR BEDS AND --
Oh sorry. Imagination getting away from me again.
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Post by Moira Rose on Feb 20, 2009 11:23:57 GMT
@koky: Yep. That one.
@pen: 'Tis fine. I did have a moment of "I CAN SEE THE EVIL IN HIS EYES- oh wait, are they closed?!" Just the aura that emanates from his picture.
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Post by Hope on Feb 20, 2009 11:44:59 GMT
Aw I liked the Tseng. I thought he looked all serious because he's just found Zack and it's too late.
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Kisara Strife
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AVALANCHE Rebel
Because he can't be dead ... T_T
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Post by Kisara Strife on Feb 20, 2009 12:09:51 GMT
Tha is amazing Clan!! And I can totally see the Zack lying on the ground near the corner! ;D
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Renolvr
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I've decided that some things are worth the pain.
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Post by Renolvr on Feb 20, 2009 18:17:31 GMT
Awww, you made me smile and broke my heart at the same Clan - it's amazing, seriously - well done!
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Post by Lunatic Belle on Feb 20, 2009 18:27:19 GMT
I didn't see the dead Zack at first.
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Post by Jeanneandheralters on Feb 21, 2009 0:15:36 GMT
Sadly, I too noticed him not. It's epic though Clan (Ha, I refuse to be dragged into calling you Ra-Ra... or to touch LoD. I beat that game ages ago and I've played the first disc so many times I can walk through it with my eyes shut probably)
On the topic of The Daily Idiocies. While it's not up, I definitely (when you get around to it if ever) want it to have a journal/diary kind of feel to it. Has to be silly though ;D and it involves Zack, Reno and the kingqueen of drama Genesis.
Basically it'll involve them getting into idiotic situations like Zack being mugged/mobbed by a moogle and such. Journal entries perhaps...
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Clan Dragoon
SOLDIER Third Class
"Well, since Aerith died, she unofficially got bumped up to 'main heroine' status"
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Post by Clan Dragoon on Feb 26, 2009 4:18:08 GMT
Hey gang - just letting everyone know that I'm on hold on banners till this weekend. Need to finish some college art stuff - but I will be sharing what I'm doing. Just so you know that I'm actually doing stuff. I have to do a bunch of mock up adds - so I decided to do Monster, even though I HATE the stuff. But anyway, my talents avec la photoshop ne avec pas Final Fantasy Seven. And yes, I know that was crappy French - meant it.
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Post by Shagi Tigori on Feb 26, 2009 4:25:01 GMT
O.O That looks awesome.... it almost makes me want to get Monster even though I hate energy drinks....
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