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Post by fearandloathing on Apr 12, 2009 11:25:41 GMT
Y'think, Moira Yaaaay. If you want to give me more advice/tips feedback please do! XD It sounds like a love/hate relationship now, but with this thing it's actually one-sided hate the whole time. I can explain more later, but right now I have a pitcher of vodka-cranberry and legally blonde to watch XDD
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Post by Loveless on Apr 12, 2009 13:40:09 GMT
Ooooh! Hello there! *stupidity reigns* Rosso and Genesis? NO PROBLEM. I've seen the weirdest pairings work out, Godo/Tifa, Red/Tifa, so I don't think this one will be any exception. You've got a pretty plausible backstory, which is lacking in so many fics out there, so that alone puts you above the average. Your little drabble is amusing, though I find it lacking something. I think it was the length that really detracted from the greatness it could've been. You've got some good stuff there, continue it! I'm watching you! Oh yeah, naming Rosso a different name was a great move. Bravo! Are you planning on fleshing out their pasts too? Thanks for the watch. And I wasn't too happy with it myself, but it was 1:00 am and I was low on inspiration.... I think it could work, Loveless. Sure, it's not perfected, and possibly Genesis takes Rosso's opinions very easily in this scene (perhaps a more intense scene would involve them both more angrily arguing either side of their case? Then again, your story and I'm just chitter-chatting). I like your way of doing this, however, and might take an opportunity to post a snippet of something I've been toying with. I think the idea of a Rosso/Genesis story has a lot of potential, Loveless ;D Aren't the Tsviets all injected with Genesis's cells or something? It's an unusual pairing, but I think it could work - they're on the right sides and everything now, aren't they? The characters seem pretty good, and I actually quite liked Rosso, in her Soviet-Russia-pregnant dog kinda way ;D I've been messing around with the idea of a Yuffie/Elena, peeps, but I started it and realized how out of practise I am in writing most VII characters, let alone someone like Yuffie, or even Reno. (It's the ones that talk the most that are the hardest to do well, IMO. You have to think constantly about everything they say.) I'm going to take a hint from Loveless here and link to a LJ post containing what I've done so far. If anyone is bored and feels like it maybe they could take a look and see what they think of it. fandlfashion.livejournal.com/606.htmlThis is intended to lead into a fem-slash piece, but at this stage it is just character experiments with no romance. I didn't have it in me to write an intense scene about them. Well they probably have their moments, and this was one of them. In any case, Genesis was mostly hearing out her argument of what defines a monster, which is why he does not express his own opinions on the matter. But yeah, Rosso's response to that line is: "Don't call yourself a monster until you've lived like one." I guess she considers that line a personal offense, hence the slap that must have hurt like a B*TCH and the slamming into the wall. As for the Cell issue...this has been bugging me, but since his cells have been spliced between them...wouldn't that mean that he and the Tsviets are somehow related...? GAH, LET IT NOT BE SO! *hides* Abwahaha. SORRY BIANKA. >< Genesis and Rosso are a fairly interesting idea, though. In a really twisted way where they rip each other limb from limb in the end. Now that's hawt. Considering your comment of Genesis going off the deep end about being a monster...for some reason I imagine Rosso taking that as a personal affront to her (and perhaps Deepground in general) to which she reacts by swiftly and *FORCEFULLY* explaining that he doesn't know what monsters are....XD Mod Edit: Try not to double post. There's a "modify" button on the right corner of your post, which you can use to fix up or add to your postings.
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Post by Loveless on Apr 13, 2009 12:26:40 GMT
Hey guys, I'm back~!
Just posting what the next one-shots are gonna be (and leave you to figure out what the plot is =P)
The Calm Intens Blau Cel Foodplay [rated M]
Admittedly I need some help with the third one. I don't plan to write it yet, but I've never written a fic where fruit is used during foreplay and whatnot....
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Post by readingchick on Apr 13, 2009 23:49:43 GMT
As for the Cell issue...this has been bugging me, but since his cells have been spliced between them...wouldn't that mean that he and the Tsviets are somehow related...? GAH, LET IT NOT BE SO! *hides* If you figure the logistics behind that one out, please let me know. It's been niggling at me for ages. >> Ahem. I like this idea of Genesis/Rosso. ;D
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Post by Youko-Kokuryuuha on Apr 14, 2009 0:42:33 GMT
Iknowrite? It's interesting.
Although I've never heard of fruit being used in foreplay. O.o
...Unless you want to counte "Not Another Teen Movie." Banana split, anyone? x3
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Post by Loveless on Apr 14, 2009 3:25:41 GMT
Well, if you're gonna write drabbles of Genesis paired with another character there are always two factors that will show up: Loveless and Banora White. I'm guessing he's not only gonna introduce her to the fruit proper but also an interesting way to eat it. XD
Don't suppose there's anyone here who wants to try their hand at drawing them? It's not compulsory but maybe if I had some visual of them in some hawt pose or other I might get inspired. *smacks head against keyboard*
Currently I'm writing Intens Blau Cel (Intense Blue Sky). Yes, all the titles will be in Catalan. Fortunately I will provide the translation...
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